Reviews of The Headmaster’s Flame

“The Headmaster's Flame is the only online book that I keep following. Others I read I end up deleting because they don't hold my interest. I love the characters so much! Your literary intelligence shines in each chapter!”

- Inkitt reader

“It's so well written! Unlike any erotica I've ever read! ...Stronger written than Fifty Shades of Grey”

- Rachel

“It's as if I'm sitting watching it on TV... Breathtaking. Mind blowing. Heart pulling. It's amazing! ...People look at me like I'm mad when I burst out laughing”

-Kerry Lee Watts

“I feel relieved that you're writing stuff that matches my filthy fantasies. Makes me feel seen!”

- Inkitt reader

“Love this story! You are a gifted storyteller. The wait between updates is excruciating. I find myself rereading chapters just to get my fix of these characters. Thank you for sharing your talent”

- Wendy, US reader

“You are so gifted, the dialogue is genius. Even though it is a taboo subject, I find myself rooting for them to make it work. Thanks for the time, effort and sacrifice you put in to bring us this wonderful story!”

- Inkitt reader

“Honestly this book has me on the hook. I love the slow, slow burn. I look forward to each chapter!”

- Inkitt reader

“I feel so good right now. Is this what love feels like? Because I am in love with this writing style, the wordplay is just so creative. The conversations between them always seem to flow beautifully and effortlessly. They talk dirty in a sophisticated way that doesn't make me cringe. I know all this is going somewhere satisfying and I can't wait to see how it all ends. Thank you for sharing your writing talent especially in such an entertaining way.”

- Mercy

“Great story. The innuendo-filled dialogue is genius. Definitely geared towards adults. Truly enjoy this story and the literature lesson in most chapters. Would highly recommend to those who enjoy witticisms and Bronte literature.”

- Inkitt reader

“I'm beyond obsessed with the book. Usually the long waits drive me up the wall but you pull it off so perfectly with the slow build that I just can't get enough!”

- Kait

“Back in teenage lust! ...I'm enjoying this so much! I love the building relationship between them. I enjoy the banter back and forth. The introduction of her fantasising adds that bit of spice - I keep waiting for him to kiss her! Look forward to reading what happens next!”

- Lisa

“I'm SO HAPPY to finally find a book in a British secondary school!”

- Inkitt reader

“My heart flutters waiting for the new chapter. I regret reading it too fast now I have to wait 😅”

- Inkitt reader

“I like the author's style of writing. It leaves me curious wanting to know what will happen next. I love this book and look forward to reading the next chapters.”

- Inkitt reader

“You write incredibly well. The dialogue is brilliant - so witty, thoughtful and funny. I was a bit dubious about the age gap, but I’ve really enjoyed the journey of their relationship. I’m hoping that they will end making this work somehow long term. They are such a great match. Looking forward to reading more 😎”

- Bridgitte

“Another amazing chapter! I love how easily they have slipped into this dynamic 🔥and how well it suits them both! Natalia is growing in confidence and is forcing Neill to feels things he hasn’t allowed himself to before ❤️🔥🔥 Loved every word 🖤”

-ELT, Inkitt reader

“The story is only on its beginning (or at least it feels like that and I truly hope so) but it's super captivating. I generally don't like writing reviews for unfinished books - or read them for that matter (yeah, yeah, patience isn't one of my virtues), but I believe it deserves a bit of a shout out, so here we go.The two main characters are highly likeable, the plot may be a bit controversial but until we know more, there's no judging from me. Since the inspiration is Jane Eyre, it's bound to be this way. The writing style and English used are brilliant and I'm utterly captivated.So, dear author, keep the new chapters coming please. And all of you others who read this, go on, give this book a try!”

- Zuzuma, Inkitt reader

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